May. 5th, 2008

  • 8:24 AM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
I spent the weekend letting my changes sink in mentally and playing video games, so today it's back to work, which involves starting over with the first two chapters (I think I'm going to outline the action first, just to make sure I get things straight before starting on the actual writing).

On the book-buying front, I got two new ones this weekend: Letters from Mexico and The Nahualli Animal Oracle. The later comes with a deck of divining cards, and apparently my nahualli is a coyote (perhaps the 3-legged one that I sometimes see in the field behind my house? Having a disable leg certainly hasn't slowed it down.).

Progress and my foul-mouthed muse

  • Apr. 11th, 2008 at 10:38 AM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
No "real" writing has gotten done in days, but oh the muse is so terribly excited and demanding I drop everything and turn him loose. I've been brain-storming the character and plot problems for my novel with some of my writing group friends for the last couple of days, and now that I've shared the rest of the basic plot line of the story with them, I've been steered in the right direction and muse is screaming "That's f-ing awesome! This next draft is so going to rock!" My biggest issue was with my protag's motivations and her lack of being an active agent of the plot and its resolution and I kept putting off addressing her issues for the longest time because it was a big cloud hanging over me. But last night I spent an hour and half just writing up a couple paragraphs about her motivations, just thinking aloud about what she wants and what's important to her and trying to see how that relates to what the other main character wants, particularly over the entire storyline of both books, and now it's finally come together. I think the motivations were always there in my mind but I'd done other things wrong, blocking them from playing a part, or I made it impossible for her act or make a choice, or if she did make a choice, it turned out to be a non-choice. I gave my protag too much access to free-magic to solve all her problems with little consequence (big rule violation concerning magic and it's trade off values, which any decent fantasy novelist wouldn't have made, but I'm new at this and feeling my way around. At least I resisted my urge to try to query some agents about this book before now and so didn't ruin my chances with any of them). I also gave that same real consequence-free magic to another character and basically made it impossible for the antagonist to even have a fighting chance (not to mention that with this power, this other character should have just used it as soon as he was an adult and everything would have been over, happy happy joy joy! So now I snatch it back from him, ha! and make it much harder for my protag to use what she can, and now the antagonist has a fighting chance and she's the only one who can stop him. And the non-choice she originally made...gone, and she's going to have a much, much tougher one to make. Plus I get to keep around a character I really really hated killing off and he can cause grief and temptation for my protag in book two. And I get to bring in more gods! Hurray! After these sessions, I've come to the conclusion that I held back too much of the broader plot in this book, mistakenly thinking I needed to save it for book two, but in fact, if the protag knows some things about the broader plan of her beloved god, it gives her extra motivation to succeed and help out.

The muse is biting and clawing to get to writing, but I'll have to muzzle him for a little while, so I can write a query and see how my protag's motivations hold up. Then it will be off to another rewrite of the outline. Plus, it was recommended that I take a look at The Mists of Avalon, since I'm doing something similar in that I'm taking a myth (not a really well-known one, but the most well-known of that particular culture's mythology) and telling it from an alternate character's POV, so I bought that yesterday and plan to read it (this is the first time I've ever bought a novel with the intent of studying it in hopes of helping my own writing.).

And in other good news, the Zokutou word meter is back up and running again. Quite pleased to see that.

Some morning musings

  • Mar. 12th, 2008 at 8:31 AM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
More book buying frenzy. This one came rather unexpectedly, for I'd put it on order back in November and Amazon spent the following months trying to track down a copy for me. Then it appeared on my doorstep yesterday, so the emails must have gone astray. Anyway I am glad to have the book , which is Aztec, Mixtec and Zapotec Armies, another Osprey "Men-at-Arms" book, full of cool pictures (the Mixtec war garb is particularly interesting, as well as the surprising information that royal Mixtec women had the political power to be "Queen" and wage war accordingly. I of course want to find out more about this for that has potential story written all over it.). Another nice addition to the research library.

This is more of a curiosity than anything, but after running a quick spell check  on the outline yesterday, to add the accent marks into my characters names after transferring my text from yWriter into Word, I noticed it scored an 12th grade reading level on their little Flisch-Kincaid reading level. The novel itself only scores a 6.5 level, so I'm curious about what constitutes the difference. How do they measure this anyway? Not that I need to know; just curious.

In other news, I'm planning to buy Duran Duran concert tickets this morning. They're going to be here at the new Wells Fargo Theater at the Convention Center May 12th.

But in the meantime, back to the outline.

Mar. 3rd, 2008

  • 8:02 AM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
Yesterday we went to Borders to see about buying a couple of The Spiderwick Chronicles books, and I can't believe they cost $12 a piece, for like 50 pages of text. What a rip-off! The trade paperback book of almost 400 pages I bought cost less than that. So I told Dana if she wants to read them, she'll have to check them out from the library. I hate to do that, but that's just outrageously expensive for a tiny hardcover that's a fraction of the size of one of the Series of Unfortunate Events books.

So today's plan is to start working on the rewrite of "The Hearts of Men" for the polish challenge over at LH, and get at least one story back out to market after a couple rejections over the weekend (the other two I'm waiting for markets to open up again.). I also saw that my editor over at Sorcererous Signals has nominated my story she published for the Million Writers Award this year, which is cool (and the second year in a row that I've had something nominated).
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
I ordered a new Aztec book from Amazon last week and it arrive yesterday, and they also sent me a box of cereal. What's up with that? I'm used to getting fliers and brochures and such, but breakfast food? I don't even like cereal (well, except Captain Crunch). That went right into the trash.



So, enough ranting already. Time to get to work writing so I can some day become a cranky old pro rather than just a cranky semi-pro:).

Progress

  • Feb. 1st, 2008 at 8:44 AM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
Morning Star Rising


Finally powered past the difficulties and I feel good about how things are unfolding (part of my problem was that I wasn't too terribly sure I was doing the right thing with the changes). Hoping for another good day.

My last copy of Codex Florentine finally arrived on Wednesday, this one the volume on rhetoric, and it's freakin' awesome! I'll have to read it and see about incorporating some uniquely Nahuatl sayings into the novel. The book basically covers prayers to Tezcatlipoca, ritual speeches the ruler would say when taking the Office of Revered Speaker, how one is supposed to address the ruler based on class, ritual speeches related to weddings and the birth of children, parental speeches to children about proper behavior based on gender, then of course the section of sayings. And while at B&N the same night, I bought a children's book on Aztecs, Incas & Maya, a DK Eyewitness book with wonderful pictures of textiles and artifacts. I love books that show everyday items like these rather than just focusing on art.

My AnthologyBuilder Antho arrives!

  • Jan. 27th, 2008 at 8:42 AM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
Received my anthology from AnthologyBuilder yesterday, and I'm very impressed with the quality. It has a nice Frank Wu cover, of a piece I recall seeing at the the MileHiCon artshow, and my table of contents includes stories from the following authors:

David de Beer
Aliette de Bodard
Tobias Buckell
J. Kathleen Cheney
Brian Dolton
Jim C. Hines
Tony Pi
Eric James Stone
Mary Robinette Kowal
Nancy Fulda
Tom Pendergrass
Ruth Nestvold
Vaughn Stanger
Eugie Foster
Steven Utley

So it's a pretty big book. Some of these authors I've read and enjoyed, but most I've never read anything by them so that's why I chose them. The one thing that would make this anthology perfect was if there were interior illustrations available to buy with the stories, though I'm sure the logistics of commissioning artists to do illustrations for specific stories could be difficult (it would be even cooler if there were several different illustrations to chose from for each story). Overall though I'm impressed with the quality of the book and I feel good about the amount of money it cost. I'm looking forward to sitting down and reading it.

Progress

  • Jan. 13th, 2008 at 8:53 AM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
Morning Star Rising
Zokutou word meterZokutou word meter
81,751 / 150,000
(54.5%)

So there's Friday's progress. Jeff's working this morning so I'm planning to work a bit this morning. Another volume of the Florentine Codex arrived yesterday, this one on the Aztec gods. Interesting spots so far: Sahagun calling Topiltzin Quetzalcóatl a minion of the Devil and claimed he was sent to Hell by God. This is snicker-worthy because there's other Spanish friars who attempted to find evidence that TQ was actually Saint Thomas, and the Mormons believe TQ was actually Jesus visiting the New World.

Progress

  • Jan. 8th, 2008 at 7:58 AM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
Morning Star Rising
Zokutou word meterZokutou word meter
65,950 / 150,000
(44.0%)

Another fine day of progress, and planning another one today.

My first volume of the Codex Florentine arrived yesterday, and boy is it a treat. Nice cloth-bound book that looks like a library book, and some of the entries make for rather amusing reading, particularly Sahagun's descriptions of "evil women" and their "friction-loving vulva." This particular volume (10) includes an encyclopedia of Nahautl terms for the parts of the body and native cures for ailments as well as detailed explanations of various careers available to both men and women in Pre-Conquest Mexico, and some history of the Toltecs and Mixtecs, so I think I will find this particular volume quite useful in fleshing out details for my novel.

First Progress of the Year

  • Jan. 2nd, 2008 at 10:16 AM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
No writing. I have a novel to finish reading and critiquing today, so that takes precedence. I did sent out a couple stories this morning, one to Space & Time and another to Fictitious Force. I also gathered together my Christmas money and bought 3 volumes of the Codex Florentine from Amazon. I got volume 1 (The Gods), volume 6 (Rhetoric & Moral Philosophy), and volume 10 (The People). The Codex Florentine is the original source that all other scholars go to for their research, and unfortunately Amazon only has about half of the full 13 volumes (though after some poking around, I found that the entire set can still be purchased directly from the University of Utah Press website), but I'm thrilled to have three of them. It will be a while before I can afford the others, since the three I bought set me back a chunk of change. I need to make more sales. >:)

Progress and book goodness

  • Nov. 27th, 2007 at 9:11 AM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
Crossed 90k on the NaNo portion yesterday, bringing my total up to 153k, and yep, I still have a ways to go. My protag has been taken back to her uncle's kingdom, to be wedded to her cousin and used as bait to lure her brother into attacking the city to rescue her before he has a large enough army.

Got a new book from Amazon yesterday, and it's totally kicks ass! It's an illustrated book about Aztec warfare, weapons, armor and tactics. It includes photographs of reconstructions of uniforms and weapons, in the materials they would have been originally made in. I totally should have gotten this for you for you birthday [info]aliettedb, because I'm sure you'd find it very useful for your Acatl stories. You can see info about it here, and I believe some of the used dealers ship from the UK, so it probably wouldn't be too expensive to get a copy.

Progress, and 212 & 213, at last!

  • Nov. 19th, 2007 at 8:12 PM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
Morning Star Rising
Zokutou word meterZokutou word meterZokutou word meter
131,746 / 150,000
(87.0%)
 
Only about 2k done today. Was never quite able to buckle down and I had to take Gaaron to the doctor today for an infection that's put a blister on the membrane of his eardrum. Poor kid.

In other news, I believe I've finally secured copies of both Interzone 212 and 213. I'm just waiting to hear back that they're indeed on their way. I'm jazzed because I was having a heck of a time finding anyone locally who was selling the magazine at all.

Progress

  • Nov. 18th, 2007 at 7:11 PM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
Morning Star Rising
Zokutou word meterZokutou word meterZokutou word meter
129,318 / 150,000
(85.0%)
 
Just under 5k done today. I had to write some pretty emotionally difficult parts today, which is probably why I found it difficult to sit down and write for any extended period of time. I'm about a chapter away from finishing part 4 and starting the last section of this novel (which is the first book in a two book series.). I'm looking forward to this last section, because everything else has naturally been leading up to this point, and my protag is also going to fall in love, which wasn't part of the original outline (or the novelette the story's based on), but almost as soon as I introduced this new character, it was obvious to me that she would end up falling in love him. It should be interesting, since he's the son of the main villian and he was also involved in the murder of her father in the first part (though he was just a boy at the time).

On the sub front, got back a rejection from Murky Depths on a story they'd held for a while and really liked, but felt it just wasn't original enough. I also got back a strange email from Space & Time tonight, which was blank, so I'll have to email them back tomorrow to make sure that it's indeed a rejection and not some email snafu before I go send the story off some place else.

I also ordered some books recently, History and Mythology of the Aztecs: The Codex Chimalpopoca, Quetzalcóatl and the Irony of Empire (which should be useful for the MSF), and another book on Aztec military garb, which hasn't arrived in the mail yet but looks cool.

Progress

  • Oct. 25th, 2007 at 8:05 AM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
I managed to make effective use of my 3 hours in the morning. I did a once over of "The Jade Bones" and sent it out to Realms of Fantasy. That's a big improvement for me in the progress department. I have today off, so I'm planning on doing a critique, updating the novel outline for NaNo, and maybe doing some work on another novel I've been working on off and on the last couple of months. Or maybe I'll try to finish up the first draft of the Egyptian fantasy story before that. I am only pages away from finishing it. After dropping Gaaron off at school, I"m going to make one last trip to the newstand and see if they've gotten in Interzone 212 (they did say they might still get it) and if they don't have it, I'm going to find somewhere on the internet to buy it from. As I understand it, Interzone's website doesn't sell individual issues.

Progress

  • Oct. 18th, 2007 at 9:33 AM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
Egyptian Fantasy story
Zokutou word meterZokutou word meter
6,563 / 8,000
(82.0%)

So I actually had a pretty decent writing day yesterday. I'm one scene away from finishing, and I could probably get it done in 7500 words, but I'm going with 8k just because.

Today I go downtown to school to do my little talk about submitting stories to markets and to have lunch with one of my former professors and fellow spec-fic writer (she teaches the science fiction writing workshop there). Should be good fun, so long as I don't freeze up and start stuttering (I've got awesome notes this time, so there should be less risk of that happening. I was never particularly good at public speaking.). This morning I trucked up to Newsland to see if they had Interzone 212 and was told that they're not going to carry Interzone anymore because the distributor has screwed them over once too often. The only other place I can think of in town that might have it is The Tattered Cover, and if they don't, then I'm going to have to order it online, which sucks but oh well (I'll also have to order 213, since [info]aliettedb's awesome alternate history/mystery story is supposed to be in there. Maybe I should just get a subscription and call it done.).

I don't know if I'll really get a chance to write today, since I'll be gone most of the day, but I'm aiming to get at least an hour in once I get back home, make a good start towards getting the ending done. Tomorrow though is a free day, with no kids and no babysitting, just me and writing time, so I'm looking forward to that.
 

Progress

  • Sep. 2nd, 2007 at 4:24 PM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal

I spent some time this afternoon looking up references for Filipino mythology for a story idea that's just beginning to simmer. It's historical fantasy, inspired by my grandmother's experiences living in the Philippines during the Japanese occupation. I always thought her story was an interesting one, and my grandfather recorded her recollections of those years in his book Another Side of Hollywood, which is his autobiography (for those who are new to the blog, my grandfather was an actor, mostly westerns and television. My great-grandfather was also a silent film actor and has a star on the Hollywood Walk of Fame. Someday, when the scanner is fixed, I'll dig up the picture of me and Dana in front of the star and post it.). In recent years she's fallen victim to Alzheimer's disease and she hardly remembers her own children let alone her grandchildren, and I think it would be nice to honor her life with a story about her and her experiences. It might take me while to get it right, but however long, I'm going to do it. It's also a nice opportunity to learn a little more about my Filipino roots, which I feel very distant from. Just a cursory glance over the mythology stuff I found on Wikipedia, to get me started, presented quite a few potential story ideas, so maybe I'll also be able to mine a few more stories out of this research. I haven't seen much WWII fantasy that takes place in the Pacific Theatre, but if anyone's familiar with any, let know where to find it because I'd be interested in reading it.

On another note, I found a place in town that specializes in magazines and today I bought the current issue of Interzone, with 

[info]aliettedb's story in it, the latest issue of RoF, and issue 100 of Space and Time (which I'm really pleased to see them coming back from the grave and giving it another go.They're suppose to reopen to subs soon too.). So I've got some reading ahead of me.

 

Progress

  • Aug. 6th, 2007 at 6:09 PM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
"The Jade Bones"
Zokutou word meterZokutou word meter
3,483 / 7,000
(49.8%)

The draft is coming along nicely, and today I'm not nearly as ill-inclined towards what I'd written yesterday as I was. I anticipate cutting a bit of it, for the story does seem a little slow starting and I've only now gotten to the action/adventure section. And I certainly don't want this to be another 10k monster, like "Love, Blood & Octli." (Nor does it feel like it needs to be, based on plot alone.).

In sub news, got a rejection from Paradox today and I'll be sending that story out to RoF once I go over the beginning and clear up a technical point that aparently led to a completely off-the-mark interpretation of who one character was (interestingly, editors seem to think that Tezcatlipoca is actually in the story as more than just a mention when he's in fact not in the story and isn't one of the other characters in disguise.). I also decided that since I wasn't going to renew two of my magazine subscriptions this year, I went ahead and subscribed to Realms of Fantasy. It's been at least four years since I last read an issue, so it's time to give it another look (I'm starting to feel good about the market in general, so that played into my decision to get a subscription as well.). 

Progress

  • Aug. 1st, 2007 at 6:09 PM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
Malinche Novella
Zokutou word meterZokutou word meter
31,961 / 35,000
(91.3%)

Not a whole lot of progress on this front today. I'm actually struggling a little bit with this most important part of the story, so it's slow going.

A couple rejections came in today, one a form, the other a nice personal note (it's time to start thinking about what to send to that particular market next, or if I need to start planning to write the next one.). I sent one story off to Talebones, the other I'm going to work on the end a little more (the pacing feels a little off at the end, a little rushed, and I want to do a few things with a couple characters.). I'll probably send it then off to F&SF in the next couple of days.

And just when I thought I'd bought all the Aztec-related books there was to buy, I bought 2 more today: Indian Women of Early Mexico and a novel called Feathered Serpent by Colin Falconer, which is about Malinche and the Conquest (and supposedly so full of sex that it puts Gary Jennings to shame. We'll see.). Some day I should really pick up The Luck of Huemac again, as well as Inca, though I've been reading Needful Things the last couple of days and enjoying that (and absorbing just how awesome King is at creating characters.). So much to read, so little time....

Small Treasures and other things

  • Jul. 2nd, 2007 at 9:35 AM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal

On Sunday we took a bunch of our old stuff over to the annual Boy Scout garage sale (Jeff's dad is a pack leader and they do this every year to raise money for the summer camping trips) and while browsing the books, I found a hardcover 1st edition of Gary Jenning's Aztec, complete with dust jacket (with only a small tear on the back). I immediately snatched that up and bought it for a mere 20 cents. And a quick jaunt over to Abebooks, Ebay, and Amazon show it goes from anywhere from $2-$100, with copies in the same condition as mine being in the upper range. Not that I'm interested in reselling it, but it makes me feel really good about spending only 20 cents to get it. It's finding little treasures like this for super cheap that reminds me why I liked going out to garage sales so much when I was a kid. Some people just don't realize what just how much some of their stuff is worth.

Probably not going to get much done today. I'm getting a late start since I found myself unable to get to sleep until after 2am this morning because of the heat. Later today, I have an appointment to take Gaaron in for an echocardiogram. He was born with a small hole inside his heart, between the atria (I think), and while it's not all that unusual for children to be born with this condition, the doctor can still hear a murmur and so wants it looked at again, to make sure it's not getting bigger. Apparently they usually seal up on their own in a couple years but his is still there. I'm of the mindset that I'm certainly not going to worry about it until the doctor tells me there's something to worry about, so I'm not stressed about going in today or anything; it's just procautionary. So we'll spend a couple hours at Children's Hospital this afternoon. I'm planning to start reading a story I'm supposed to critique this morning after breakfast but probably won't get any writing done.

Progress

  • Feb. 13th, 2007 at 8:17 PM
April Fools, Xolotl, Cookie Monster, The Smoking Mirror, Squirrels, McQueen, Gaarbear, Beeker, Chalchihuitlicue, Paradox, Scar, Hades, Lupin, Tlazolteotl, Hufflepuffs, Dogs, Tonatiuh, condor at sunset, Slytherin, Evil, Mictlantecuhtli, Scarab, Mayahuel, Genie, Sirius, Chalchiuhtotolin, Simba, Dinger, Cuzco, Whatever Meg, Damsel, Huh?, DaVinci Werewolf, Xochipilli, Chantico, Snape woo-hoo, Patecatl, Roo, Itzpapalotl, Quetzal Bird, The Feathered Serpent, Xochiquetzal
So I worked all day and got a draft of my story for the SSC done. It came in slightly longer than I'd originally thought it would, but it's still in short story range so I'm happy. I think it turned out better than I thought it would, but it still needs quite a bit of work and I have to gel the theme a bit more than I have it right now. But I've also decided that I'm probably not going to shoot for the polish challenge too, since it could result in having to do a ton of reading. I might just do my rewrite when I feel a little less rushed and send it off to a few people for their opinions, then get it out to market. I have some friends to read anyway (I got my copy of ASIM in recording timing. I wasn't expecting it for at least two weeks, since it was coming from Australia, but there it was in my mailbox today. The backcover was torn--got stuck to the envelope's sticky--and for the amount of money I paid for this, that really irritates me. If this were through Amazon, I'd send back and demand a replacement.). Dana was enamored with the unicorn on the front and has been poking at me for the last hour to hurry up and read [info]aliettedb's unicorn story so I can determine if it's something I can read to her or not.