So I made a start on the rewrite of "The Hearts of Men", retyping from scratch, and got about 3 pages done. Plan to work some more on that today. I also started jotting down notes for the rewrite of "The Place That Makes You Happiest" and I think I've got every point covered save for one, and it's one I didn't anticipate having a problem with. I might try to pick the LJ brain about it in a friends-locked post later.